Dominatrix Novel - Need your help.

[s10dulkar]

[hide]Hi!

I know some of you guys would be confused why I haven't taken any action as I proposed a month ago (and I especially apologize to Moneytrouble). Basically, I have changed the third book of my novel variedly. The whole concept of the novel has been changed. Now, it's no more a simple story about a dominatrix. It's basically 'Everything about BDSM'. The main character of the novel is playing her role to help you understand these things. Along with her, there are many other characters to explain the BDSM scenarios. As I mentioned earlier, the book has been written for EVERYONE. Even those who are not into BDSM. It can help everyone to understand the true depth of our community. (I'm sure that most of you don't know it either.) Each book has it's own purpose:

1. Introduction to BDSM. (Book Name: Once A Dominatrix...)
2. General and Specialized BDSM activities. (Book Name: Lives of Perverts)
3. BDSM Lifestyles. (Book Name: Is this true?)

Now, let me remind you that this book is NOT ABOUT FEMDOM ONLY. This is about the whole BDSM Community. There are Femdom, Maledom, Femsub, and Malesub characters. Each playing different roles in the novel, and also working in the scenario examples. Now, I'm thinking about changing the most basic thing of the novel. I want to change its TITLE. The name 'Dominatrix' confuses the concept, as it's related with Femdom category of our community. I want the novel to sound more for its purpose. I want your recommndations.

Now you would be asking how can you name a novel without knowing anything about it. Let me post the 'Preface' of my novel here. It might help you to understand a few things about the novel.

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PREFACE
(Please Read – Very important)
Hi!
Behind writing this novel, there are two ideas. The first one is to write a novel that is based on the characters involved in BDSM Activities. The Second is to explain BDSM and Fetish in details. It not only explains the culture and environment, but it also discusses, in detail, plenty of scenarios, by using many different characters. You will find the definitions of plenty of BDSM terminologies, tools, activities, scenarios, lifestyles, characters, participants, mentalities, and psychological reasons of many activities. It is intended for all those who are into BDSM, and all those who are not but are interested to learn about it. However, if you consider yourself not being into BDSM, this novel will pinch you many times to revise your decision. Personally, I will recommend you NOT TO READ THIS NOVEL, if you don’t want to take the RISK of becoming one of the BDSM people. Might not be all, but majority of people who read this novel, they will review many things in their lives. Personally, I’ve written it for EVERYONE, except those who are UNDERAGE.

An author is in real trouble when he has to satisfy a big audience, and a lot of them actually try to do so. However, there can be nothing that can satisfy everyone, as all the people have different requirements. On contrast, some people shorten their audience and write for a specific group of people. I’ve done none of these. By explaining so many scenarios and activities, my purpose is to explain BDSM with examples. For the people who have those fantasies, they can enjoy these. For those who are reading it for information, I’m damn sure they will be provided all the information they need. Although this book can be utilized for training BDSM Professionals, or human psychology (in some cases), there can be some people who would deny/oppose my ideas, theories and explanations.

Before you start reading the novel, I would like to inform you that, this novel contains and targets all the following aspects by using graphical and explanatory details, and by using short stories having respective scenarios:

• Femdoms (Dominatrices) with Males and Females Submissives (Malesubs & Femsubs)
• Maledoms (Dominant Males) with Female Submissives
• Switches Males and Females (Dominants & Submissive at the same time)
• Psychological explanations and reasons of many BDSM Fantasies and Fetishes
• Effects of BDSM on Non-BDSM people, and their interaction with each other
• Effects of BDSM on the lives of Professionals and Activists, and their relatives
• Bondage (Physical Restrain)
• Discipline (Psychological Restrain, accompanied with Punishments)
• Nudity
• Vanilla-style Sexual Activities
• Sadomasochism (Caning, Whipping, Spanking, etc.)
• Domination & Submission Role Plays, Real-life Scenarios, and Lifestyles
• Professionals working in BDSM Communities (Dominatrices, Maledoms, Femsubs & Malesubs)
• Types of Professional Dominatrices
• Negative & Positive effects of the BDSM
• Definitions & Clarifications of terminologies, mis-concepts, and keywords of BDSM
• Comparison of Lifestyle Dominatrix & Professional Dominatrix
• Leather & Latex Fetishism
• Transvestitism & Clothing Fetish
• BDSM Switch Activities & Scenarios
• Financial Domination – Different Types
• Feet & Boots Fetishism
• Oral-Sex activities – Vanilla and Fetishism both
• Cuckoldry Fetishism
• Power Exchange & Total Power Exchange
• Rape Fantasies
• Pegging (Reverse – Female on Male penetration sex)
• An Ideal BDSM club with state of the art structure
• Comparison of BDSM Participants with the rest of the world
• References to all the High-end activities, which can cause nausea to some, but are participated by few BDSM people
• References to plenty of other scenarios (important but not in harmony of the storyline, so skipped)
• Precautionary Measures of the BDSM activities
• Ways to Improve the BDSM Professionals and Professionalism
• Abuse – Definition & Detailed Explanation from BDSM Perspective

Now, this is NOT an ENCYCLOPEDIA but a NOVEL. So, it should have a story. A Story of ‘Someone’… a highly trained professional ‘Dominatrix’. In three phases of her life, she will lead you to your BDSM Mastery. However, this novel is indeed a novel, and you will get a main storyline, plenty of short stories, plenty of secondary and supporting characters, several twists and a climax of each phase, the main climax at the end, and so on.

You should clearly understand that this novel is not going to give you ‘Erotic Stimulations’ throughout the novel, no matter what kinds of fantasies you have. You should read it mainly for its story and/or the information and explanations it contains. It’s written in the style of a normal fiction novel (and not the regular B-grade-style pornographic novels), and the scenarios involved have some or many reasons, besides being erotic in nature. Now, there is one more thing you need to know. English is my Second Language. Although I’ve worked hard to bring a standard composition (if not a good one), I know I would have failed in some places. Please bear it, and let me know my mistakes. I will try to improve myself if you send me your recommendations, and will try my best to bring better composition in my later work.
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This Novel has 3 books in it, 1 list of BDSM Laws (that I've created myself ), and 1 Poem (With BDSM perspective indeed.) Now, I need your help in finishing up my project. I believe you can find my previously created cover page in the bottom of this forum. But as I'm going to change the Title, I think the cover page should be update as well. So, I need your help in following things.

1. Novel Title.
2. Proof Reading and Editing the Novel by people who have English Composition skills.
3. Cover Page (Based on the title).
4. Suggestions for launching my Novel. (I don't have money for doing any marketing, so suggest anything that doesn't involve money.)
5. Any help that you can do in the time my novel being published. Even your posts on the other forums can greatly help.[/hide]

[femaleworship]

how far have you reached with the book